It's not the animation that matters
The message got across and that's the best impact you can have on a viewer. I'm terribly sorry for the loss and hope everyone whom she has affected will recoup. But your style is good, it's very smooth and simple. It's easy to look at unlike most other flash movies that try so hard to outdo each other graphically that it becomes just cluttered with crap, you have one focus and you know how to emphasise it.